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The White Queen hastily reached into her pocket and pulled out a bottle from it. It was a small bottle, rather skinny, containing a light, purple liquid. She handed it to Alice, giving her a sad smile.

"Take it. You deserve it. You've EARNED it. You've saved us all."

Alice stared longingly at the bottle, knowing it would grant her the one wish that she desired the most if she was to drink the purple liquid bubbling inside of it. She took the bottle, held it up closely to her beautiful face, blinking at the sight. "If..." she said quietly. "If I drink this, will... Will it take me home...?" The White Queen nodded slowly. "If that is what you wish," she said, rather uncomfortably.

Alice stared at it some more, then, sighing, slowly twisted off the black lid that was keeping the liquid from spilling out, and tossed it aside. She heard gasps of surprise, shock, and even disappointment.

She slowly turned around, only to see each and every one of her friends staring longingly at her. "Please don't go," they were begging her. "You don't have to--"

"You could stay, you know."

The familiar voice made Alice whip her head around in surprise, just in time to see her most important and favorite friend of all that had helped her the most on her journey. His tangled, red-orange hair blew in the wind. His eyes were a bright, rich, glowing green color that resembled two emerald orbs.

The face of the man standing before her looked depressed. It Iooked as though Christmas had just been cancelled. In his hand, he held a staff, with a meduim-sized orb attached to the top of it. His suit was tattered, and some of the buttons were ripped off, dangling, literally hanging by a thread. One-half of his orange bow-tie was also torn off. The other half of it was full of holes. And last, but not least, his hat was also tattered and torn, but he was wearing it nevertheless.

"You don't have to go," he went on in a little bit of a desperate voice. "Please, Alice. I've done so much for you, and that's not selfish. You know it's true. Remember, back when you were young? You wouldn't have found your way out of that dark, tunnel-like hole if it wasn't for me. I helped you out, remember? I've waited thirteen whole years for this... You can't just leave Wonderland... Not yet... Not like this..."

Alice sighed again, her eyes filling with tears. "I understand, Hatter," she said softly. "You're right: You HAVE done a lot for me, but..." She looked down. "... But things have changed in this world-- MY world. There's things I have to do, questions I have to answer. I'd love to stay, but you have to understand... I can't."

Silence.

They could hear nothing but the blowing wind until the Mad Hatter responded.

"... You won't remember me," he said finally. He couldn't seem to take his eyes off of hers. She looked back up at him again, her tears more visible. "I will, too!" She sputtered through them, now sobbing softly. "You KNOW I will... I'll be back before you know it..." She walked toward him.

They both stared at each other for a long time before the most extraordinary thing happened. They had both leaned in to each other's warm lips at the same time, wrapping their arms around each other, falling into their own embrace.

The kiss lasted seven full seconds before they both pulled away from each other's lips, both of them staring longingly into each other's eyes.

Alice gulped, wiping away the tears.

"Have you guessed the riddle, yet?" the Mad Hatter asked suddenly. Alice blinked in confusion. "What riddle?" she asked him. "The one about the raven and the writing desk," he answered. "Oh," said Alice. She smiled sadly at him. "No, I give it up," she said. "What's the answer?" The Mad Hatter smiled right back at her. "I haven't the slightest idea," he said, rather a little loudly. "Nor do I," laughed the March Hare, agreeing.

Alice sighed wearily, but still smiled. "I'd think that you'd do something better with your time," she said jokingly, "than wasting it by asking riddles that have no answers."

She was just joking, playing along with him, and he knew that. EVERYONE knew that. Alice gave a sad wave. "Bye, everyone," she said. "I'll come back whenever I can."

then, taking a deep breath before doing so, she tipped the skinny, clear bottle's inside purple liquid into her mouth, taking a moment to taste it, then she drank it down in one single gulp. She could tell that it would take a while for it to work.

The Mad Hatter suddenly motioned for her to come close to him, so she did just that. She was expecting him to kiss her again, but, surprisingly enough, he didn't. He just leaned in, close to her ear, then whispered into it: "The answer to the riddle is that because it can produce a few notes, though they are very flat, and it is NEVAR put with the wrong end in front!"

Alice thought about that for a moment, then she suddenly got the riddle: "Ravens didn't have much variety in their songs, and people used desks to write (paper) notes as well. "All very flat"-- Well, what could be flatter than a piece of paper? And ravens' songs were apparently rather flat-sounding. "And are almost NEVAR turned the wrong way front"-- A desk was useless if it was faced the wrong way, because you couldn't sit there. "Raven" spelled backwards was "Nevar", and thus, "Raven" was almost "Never" turned the wrong way front.

Alice laughed at his riddle, which seemed more like a joke to her, before everything turned black. The Mad Hatter, the March Hare, Tweedle-Dee and Tweedle-Dum, the White Queen-- They all faded away.

But before Alice "woke up" from her so-called "dream", she saw the Mad Hatter's face last, and he was still smiling at her. And then--for just a mere instant--she could've sworn she saw a sunbeam flash of pure gold in his eyes.


                                                    The End
okay, you have GOT to watch Tim Burton's "Alice in Wonderland" movie!! if you haven't watched it, then GO watch it, like, NOW!! =D

you won't really get this fanfic unless you have watched the movie. it made me really depressed that alice and the mad hatter didn't kiss or even hug or something like that at the end cuz it seemed like they were going to -.- (yes, i watched the movie today) so anyway i figured that alice and the mad hatter were a pretty damn good couple! and wrote about it.

oh, and by the way, this is JOHNNY DEPP'S mad hatter, not the original (the one with the white hair, big nose, freckles, green suit, numbers on his hat, etc.)

plz comment, thx =)
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MusicRocks14 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010  Student Writer
That was awesome! I wanted her to stay in the end so badly....Hatter was so sad. :(
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ZombieCatRAWR1 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2010
awww now i have tear on my eye! lol!
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adriana-cullen Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2010
Love it! Hey check out my mad hatter+alice series that is strangely ALSO named Mad Love.
Odd.
:D
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hannahble-bibble Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
<33333 Loved it XD I always thought that a raven was like a writing desk because they can both make you free.... Flight for the Raven, and when I'm writing, I'm free to do anything; be anything; I want to be. :)
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isabellafae Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010
This is great!!!!!
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mizzymarine Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
THis is the >>exact<< ending that I imagined. It totally ruined it when they didn't go ahead with it!! :(

I think the people who want that ending should at least petition for a sequel!!
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Jakie-the-Hedgecat Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010
lol i wish this was the real ending when i was watching the movie i was like " oh c'mon kiss her! " xDD

Bravo on the story ^^
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WolfOfMusic Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2010
Nice! I do say I was rather disaponted in the ending. Everyone I am sure was expecting a brotherly kiss on the cheak or a glomp. I am mean, Alice dident even shed one tear! She could have shown a little more emotion to the ending of her days in Underland. But Tim Burton still did a wonderful job anyways and your writting is very very good as well!
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MutePoetess Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
=[ =[ =[ I wanted her to stay in Underland (both in the movie and in your story). This is so so sweet. I was wondering if I'd find a fanfic about this because I totally thought he was at least going to kiss her cheek or something at the end of the movie. I wish they had! They are an adorable couple!
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SwirlyEyesHypnotize Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
That was awfully romantic, you did such a great job! Good show! I love this movie!
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willowtaraforever Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010
that is how the movie should have ended they needed to kiss but thety didnt and that made me mad
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dragonwing1312 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2010
How did you figure out the riddle???? I though I had the answer, but it's not as good as yours. I though a raven was like a writing desk because they were both used by Edgar Allen Poe. I like yours better though. Wonderful job, this is amazing! :)
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BLOWAB Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010   Writer
well, it may seem sort of false, but i looked up the answer to the riddle when i didn't know it, and then i thought, "Oh, NOW it makes sense!" :D

anyway, thanks :) oh and your answer was good too.
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iAmSLi Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010
Dude! Totally love it, i was sad about the end too. I wanted them to kiss so bad! I wrote a journal about it haha. Love it <3
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madhatterlover1235 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010
it was awsome!
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Haryza Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2010  Professional General Artist
They were so crushing on each other. That would've been a good ending.
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Francis-Pants Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2010  Student General Artist
this is exactly how i would've ended the movie.

bravo, love.
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FairestEpona Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
In the original script apparently they did kiss.....but for the movie they edited it out :(
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missemia97 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2010  Student General Artist
Brilliant! I'm glad to know what happens. (save the kiss) I was going to see it today, but my stupid little brother threw a fit so we had to watch that stupid dragon movie. :/ The whole time I wanted to sneak out to see Wonderland! Meh, I'll go tomorrow. Anywhooooo, great writing. It's simple enough to understand what's going on, but it also captures a lot of emotion. Kudos to you!
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jaypaw8 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Dude, its like you took the scene I imagined as I left the movie theater (although without Tweedle-Dee and Tweedle-Dum arguing about it on the background) and wrote it down, I was really sad that they didn't kiss, it would've been the perfect ending, that was the only thing that the movie disappointed me in, but it opens the possibility of a sequel...
but getting back to the point: pure awesomeness :)
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mizzymarine Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I agree entirely!! I reckon if we all came up with a heaps long petition to make a sequel that it'd happen!! :) I wish! Orrr if we can't get them to make a sequel, write a book of fan endings, get it published and gather contacts to create a movie. :) That'd be mad as, and I've got an idea of how it'd go. :D

I <3 the hatter and alice together!! It >>totally<< ruined it when they weren't!!
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jaypaw8 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
A petition might be good, there are a bunch of possibilities open for a sequel, its Alice in Wonderland so basically anything goes :) A fan book would be really interesting too! and probably extremely random and a movie of the book would be even awesome :D

I've been mulling over an idea for a possible fan fic that would be like a sequel to the movie, I plan on getting serious on it an posting it on Deviant once I finish with all the stories I'm currently working on

I know what you mean by >>totally<< ruined it! There was that moment near the end (one of the ones I remember the most) that it looked for all intents and purposes like they were going to kiss, and they just go with each other perfectly :)
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mizzymarine Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
I completely agree with you. :) And when I first watched Alice in Wonderland I completely fell in love with it, apart from the ruined ending. I have a rigmarole of ideas that would just be completely in tune for a sequel. Who knows? If I wrote a sequel and got enough hits for it I could possibly help along a sequel. Hmm... haha it's got me thinking... If I do write a sequel I'll post it at www.worthyofpublishing.com under fan fiction. Hmm... Definitely a possibility. Well, I'm gonna go write now. :D
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nevrgonabalone Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
I was like alice will you KISS HIM?! *saw it again today and I'll be damned If I wouldn't have kissed or hugged him* And I was atleast certain that on the boat Johnny Depp would have been there not as the mad hatter but similar y'know? But anywho LOVE this ^^
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sferacheng Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2010
homg i FCKIN love this ending insteaddddddd >.<
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SonamyRocker Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2010
wow that was gr8!!!!
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cheza51 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010
is this the real endin?
its so sad n happy at the sam tim
T-T
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BLOWAB Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010   Writer
yes it is the real ending, but they didn't really kiss in the movie. they seemed like they were ABOUT to kiss, but surprisingly enough, they didn't.
=( so i just sort of threw that part in there. ^_^
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cheza51 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010
lol
i thot so
i cant imagine jhonny deppt kissin
her
XD
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aMege Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
is this what happens at the end?
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BLOWAB Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010   Writer
ok, let me re-phrase that: alice and the mad hatter didn't really KISS each other at the end of the movie, but i thought it'd be nice if they did, so i got around to writing about it :)
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aMege Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
ah... FINALLY I KNOW WHAT HAPPENS AT THE END OF THE MOVIE!!!!
i haven't seen it yet :O

thank you :D
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BLOWAB Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2010   Writer
yes, indeed it it =D thanks for commenting =)
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aMege Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
your welocme :D
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